Sunday, 19 January 2020

#20 go into each day not knowing ---> impossible to see out when you're in the picture






20th January, 2020
20
go into each day not knowing
(my unsubtle art)

to each day not knowing
how things vanish and go under
how blue dry the sky’s speech

                in the season
                called nibbling
                wallabies come

G# is a looming cavernous note
(Ab, on the other hand)

delicate light to which we fall

the principle must be going too far
(especially when you get between)
and on from

to challenge the integrity of any surface

(kookaburras are up for excitement
and cheeky buggers too)

to let a thing take its own time
making a map from

a fantasy of top branches

the plan is a legend
shows everything fell
(surprising the size of words
their impact)

and how is it in the deeps?
paint, I mean
and the liberal daub over

which words should follow along
bubble back
?

ARE THE WORDS OF THE MOMENT HERE?

cage one if caught

find haiku in

bodies of water
blessed with event
birds have a lot to say

consider the image content

                seen things
                next to each
                and I agree

forgetting which bit of the day I am in

garden it all up – five acres
some days died
and gone to heaven

each day, never revealed
a mind too subtle for itself
for worlding

I will come more to the middle of things

speak with creatures

some days love falls in with me

it could be the day

let’s come out of mourning
get on with the job

how things vanish and go under
to each unknowing

stare at the newspaper
same all day
how long ago was that?

it’s inward of habits
I will learn to lap  

must be a spot left

with what strange desperation scratch?
just this little canvas
in on which I’m known

how will I lead to conclusion?
where will I come to rest?

questions after questions
words under over words

impossible to see out
when you’re in the picture







2nd draft … start at the end, work back, discard


impossible to see out
when you’re in the picture

                in a season
                called nibbling
                wallabies come

how blue dry the sky’s speech after

daub and slide where wet still

scratch wings up
(bower bird, wagtail, groundling wren)

and make blue too!
call colours out

some days love falls in with me

delicate light to which we fall
green barely back

kookaburras are there for excitement
principle must be going too far

in a fantasy of top branches
let a thing take its own time  

cloud colour drifting

cage words if caught
are those of the moment with us?
consider

                seen things
                next to each
                and I agree

inward of habits
must be a spot left

just this little canvas
in on I’m known

forgetting which bit of the day am in
but come to the middle of things

how they vanish
go under

sun hue
and trunk rise

crop close
be paws up for

it could be the day

the plan is a legend
shows everything fell
(surprising the size of words
their impact)

some days died
and gone to heaven
speak with the creatures there

find haiku in

bodies of water
blessed with event
birds have a lot to say













and a senryu left over:

stare at the newspaper
same all day
how long ago was that?





I go to destroy the picture now 

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