Thursday, 16 January 2020

#17 - come down in the last shower








17th January, 2020
17
come down in the last shower

joy of it

eyes up
expressing wonder

built for days
in workshop faraway
say west

first notes
its genius
all fall for that
with without the thunder

crafted
the real stuff

stretch trumpeting
the squeeze

as if we’d never known before
grown fat on this idea
like taking out a loan

a leaf uncurls
green for the grey

as if a tree came
just add light
as if a tree came down

I got lost in it  
weeks and days
must have took a wrong turn
come down the creek
like Christmas

blame heaven
for this trust

I call puddle
make mud of it
and measure
as if a thing foretold

can’t hear a thing
would still a clock

beyond buckets
still have to catch
it’s habit

like a pond returned
from sky say
now half way

must play for it
dance daggily

now half way full

gravity’s slave
this stuff is

stand out for a wash
who wouldn’t soak in

it thrills your every animal
hands spread
palms upturned to touch
is how we lap it up

frogs are all telling
kamikaze bugs
demand our attention
come down
in the last shower









2nd draft:
come down in the last shower

joy of it
crafted
the real stuff

with without the thunder

first notes
its genius
all fall for

built days
in workshops far
say west

eyes up
expressing wonder

stretch trumpeting
the squeeze
and finally…

as if we’d never known before
grown fat on this idea
like taking out a loan

a leaf uncurls
green for the grey

a tree came
just add light
as if a tree came down

can’t hear a thing
would still a clock

I got lost in it  
weeks and days
must have took a wrong turn
come down the creek
like Christmas

and measure
as if thing foretold

I call puddle
make mud of it

blame heaven
for this trust

beyond buckets
still have to catch
it’s habit

like a pond returned
from sky say
now half way

must play for it
dance daggily

now half way full

gravity’s slave
this stuff is

stand out for a wash
who wouldn’t soak with
it thrills your every animal

hands spread
palms upturned to touch
is how we lap it up

frogs are all telling
kamikaze bugs demand attention
they and we all equally are
come down in the last shower








or a little piece:


come down in the last shower

stand out for a wash
who wouldn’t soak with?
it thrills your every animal

hands spread
palms upturned to touch
lap it up

frogs are all telling
kamikaze bugs demand attention
they and we all equally are
come down in the last shower

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