Saturday, 11 January 2020

#12 - remembering rain




12th of January, 2020
12
remembering rain

came all corners at once
when shone well after

how we’d watch, whiff
see runs of it

never in the schedule
spoke eloquent as soil

it was a stretch
and loosening
trick of sky

we reached to touch it too

soaked to the old bones dance
please let me know
what was said

caught the fire to pour
and how it settled dust!

immortal as our cinder-selves
which is to say

it was a prayerful drowning
it fell for us!

as if commanded!
told in points and inches
that was the hieratic rain
of ages

how gladly
we all animals

I held it, beading, to the skin

rain come the long way
slowly, slowly
had never forgotten us

I saw the rain’s ghost again
it fell on country today

it seemed a wronged thing
poisoned with smoke
blamed about

it was standing on a steady grey
you’d fell it with an axe
cloud could
it might have spoken

but the rain went on its way

I dreamt it
bow drawn
it was brief

like a tune from the book still sung
in cords as timber fell

shaped hopes all sorts and sizes

some flew in this
(bassoon for an understory)
I held hands to cup

and shining as belief

had left a bowl out overnight
and here was all fours
outpouring
all hearts

this rain was a kind of rebellion
and washed dry thoughts away

trilled to the middle
the half way fallen
(angel undecided)

there was a white sky and a blue
clouds we kept for pets

fell in a reverie
everyone followed
nothing to do but

still secret
some days as if

just a tear
and the big boys wipe it away
to go on

come into my dream
won’t you
?


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2nd draft:

remembering rain

it was a stretch
and loosening

came all corners at once

never in the schedule

trick of sky
when shone well after

how we’d watch
see runs of it
spoke eloquent as soil

and whiff
we reached to touch it too

soaked to the old bones dance
told what?

and how it settled dust!
pawed over fire

immortal as our cinder-selves
which is to say

it was a prayerful drowning
fell for us!

as if commanded!
as of ages

told in points and inches
that was the hieratic rain

I held it, beading, to the skin

rain come the long way
slowly

had never forgotten us

I saw the rain’s ghost again
it fell on country today

poisoned with smoke
blamed about

it seemed a wronged thing

standing on a steady grey
you’d fell it with an axe
cloud could
it might have spoken

but the rain went on its way

I dreamt it
bow drawn
it was brief

like a tune from the book still sung
in cords as timber fell

shaped hopes all sorts and sizes

some flew in this
(bassoon for an understory)
held hands to cup

and shining as belief

I’d left a bowl out overnight
and here were all fours
outpouring
all hearts

this rain was a kind of rebellion
trilled to the middle
the half way fallen
(angel undecided)
it washed dry thoughts away

fell in a reverie
everyone followed
nothing to do but

still secret
some days as if

a white sky and a blue
clouds we kept for pets

just a tear
and the big boys wipe it away
to go on

come into my dream
won’t you
?

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